Lol, it's more like a style-changing meme than actually an improvement meme.
Blank Meme: [link]
I think it's a little bit better now, but mostly it's not really possible to compare because my style changed heavily. Although this is not my best work so far, I guess ;;
It's not completely the same because I sketched it in a restaurant without the old one to compare. So pose and dress is a little bit different. I left out the rose petals because I think they're really cheesy nowadays lol.
The old one: [link]
The new one: [link]
hope you like it